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 im saying it this way, bc, i cant describe it any better, but in nyc, as a woman in STEM, u have to be an absolute c*nt at work, 1. stfu i need this info from u to get my work done 2. i dont owe anyone even a smile, nothing 3. u have to respect me, regardless of what i look like, based on my qualifications & experience & im going to CORRECT you immediately (in front of ppl) if u think i dont have exp in something i have exp in (i saw this happen & it was the right thing to do). but here is the thing, THAT TYPE OF ATTITUDE, ive known, i get it, i grew up in NJ, i can be that, HOWEVER, that type of attitude @ penn would have intimidated ppl & that would have worked against me (i.e "you're too mean" "you're too forward") bc thats a different environment, ppl are different, its complicated, but that is correct, to be more of an absolute non-people pleasing, (no other way to say it) an absolute fking c-nt @ work. 
 
-if i really wanted to stay at penn for awhile, i would have cared more but i didnt so i did not. i wrote in my spreadsheet of the jobs i was applying to in 2014-2015, "max 2 yrs" i want to work before applying to grad school. so im sitting around, at lunch, laughing with my work friends about the dumbest sht on the planet like it really is hs, and that was fine, bc in my mind, i knew it was temporary.
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+if i really wanted to stay at penn for awhile, i would have cared more but i didnt so i did not. i wrote in my spreadsheet of the jobs i was applying to in 2014-2015, "max 2 yrs" i want to work before applying to grad school. so im sitting around, at lunch, laughing with my work friends about the dumbest sht on the planet like it really is hs, and that was fine, bc in my mind, i knew it was temporary.
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+the reason i dont do that, like act like an absolute fking c-nt at work, is bc its a little disingenuous, bc its genuinely not who i am, i can be that, its almost like a "positive manipulation" u have to come across as that so someone takes u seriously, but in the right environment bc @ penn, that's very, very intimidating, but in nyc, ppl get that, that's the norm, well its the norm if u want to play the game at a very high level (i.e. like m s k)
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